Feedback

I have been given feedback to improve my final draft of my magazine to produce an improved front cover, contents page and double-page spread.

Front cover:
Reduce size of pug
Justify all blurbs and article headlines to right margins
Remove "always" from blurb and justify to fit under "Serena" better

Contents page:
Make background colour darker
Make Serena's article more prominent
Adjust layout
Wider variety of font styles and colours needed

Double-page spread:
Make background colour darker
Add filters to images
Add yellow accent colour